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The viewer Lisa Kennedy has a positive review of the film The Social Network. According to Kennedy, " Americans are obsessed with connecting to others, but for the life of us, we can't seem to get along. Turns out, neither could the folks who lay claim to Facebook's inception." The Social Network shows how becoming successful can tear friendships apart. Mark Zuckerberg and Eduardo Saverin are both smart, but their personality traits are very different, which brought their friendship to a end. Kennedy seems to be very satisfied of how the characters are not very lovable, but very comprehensive for their hubris. In the film it shows " all his ambitions, Zuckerberg doesn't appear motivated by money or even power, exactly. That said, much is made of the young man's desire to be tapped by Harvard's most exclusive "final club" and his resentment at not being chosen" (Kennedy). Mark Zuckerberg ambition is to work on the Facebook website that can bring college students to connect with each other. Lisa Kennedy critics about the film The Social Network are some quite true. The fact that the performance of the film had very good viewpoints.